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Hey Caroline! These photos are great! In the first photo I really like the contrasting lines and the shapes that the negative space in the lines make. To improve this photo I would recommend maybe a different framing option, cutting out the grass to the right side of the picture, or maybe using the dome in the top left as a focal point. I would either use it as a focal point or remove it from the photo, it draws the viewers eyes away from the lines and shapes. I really like the colors in this photo as well though! Overall great picture! The second image is amazing as well. I love the contract between the colors and they way you framed where the three parts of the poles connect in the right 1/3 of the image. I would say to improve this image I would try to get more of a focus on the bar and maybe straighten the camera angle out a bit. In the third photo I enjoyed how you used the lighting to intensify your lines, however the framing is a bit off. It would look a lot better you cut out the ground beneath the shelf. Also adding a focal point would really help this image, it is a bit bland and simple. In the fourth image I love the focal point. I love that you used the corner of this object to create a line and you were then able to use both sides of the object to incorporate more lines and shapes into your image. I would say the only thing about this image I would change is the framing, I would cut out the bottom of the object as well as anything thats not the object by changing my camera angle to be closer to the object. I also really enjoy the simplicity in the fifth picture. However this picture does lack in color, focal pint, and framing. I would straighten out the frame, maybe get closer to the object or use a different angle/POV. The colors are very dull are dont jump out a lot. This photo doesn't give the viewer much to look at. Overall these pictures are great!
ReplyDeleteI think that if you work on your skills next projects photos will look even better!